Saturday, August 20, 2016

Dawn To Dusk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everynight when we're on the battleground
Neither one of us cave or ever back down
is it my flame that keeps you drawn?
when we can assume the love is gone
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Marcquiese Burrell
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Tom Billsborough 20 August 2016

I think the answer is in the last line, however painful it might be. Beginning to sound like a power struggle rather than love. It's a very good and thought provoking poem. Well done.

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Marcquiese Burrell

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