Daylight Poem by Blue Moonlight

Daylight

Rating: 5.0


Dusk could use a little brightness from dawn.

Almost nothing ought to be in the dark.

Yelling is not similar to a yawn.

Listen to the music of a day's lark.

Indeed, this thing doesn't make any sense.

Gray night skies are only being lightened.

Having someone to call me 'tensely dense, '

Today's sun should just really be heightened.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 11 March 2012

A really wonderful poem, really like it. A great write.

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Ramesh Rai 11 March 2012

Today's sun should just really be heightened. nice

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Umul Baneen Brohi 11 March 2012

Yelling is not similar to yawn...great lines. May I invite you to read my poem Life: a token free roller-coaster.

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

This is a fantastic poem based on an excellent theme, the flow is like a wind, I like the poem...please read mine ‘’I want to die’’

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