Dead Poem by mackenzy edmonds

Dead



She picks up the knife and says beautiful knife that cuts. She picks up the gun and says beautiful gun that shoots.she picks up the rope and says beautiful rope that hangs. She turns on the sink and says beautiful water that drowns so many ways to die she picks up the rope and says awe but this one is my future. She puts the rope around her neck then puts the other side around the railing of the stairs then says good father good mother I am sorry I was such a burden then jumps. There she hangs dead, dead to the world her parents do care for they do not know. They come home and see she is hanging dead, dead to the world. They cry but are they really crying or are they overjoyed…they are overjoyed… I’ve never seen them so happy; I smile down here knowing what’s going to happen. An evil grin that no understands

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josh Schultz 26 April 2010

It's a very dark and synyster poem but I like it, I think it woudlve been better had you rhymed but it's just my opinion,8

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