Dead Is Dead Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Dead Is Dead

Rating: 5.0


Dead is considered as dead
As no sentiments are read
From non living items like wood
It is naturally understood

Some of human beings are same
With nothing to say and claim
Share the grief or happiness
They are having stone like face

It is good to be aloof
But not under one roof
It is considered as selfish nature
You got to be kind and ready to nurture

It is considered good to be selfish
To some extent yes and with little gain to finish
It may have less bearing on mind
As it is prevalent in every human kind

You need all people for some use
You can always not afford to refuse
It is essential to be good and kind
Else you may be left simply behind

Wealth plays an important role
But does not respond to humanitarian call
It must have an aspect of human mind to read
And we got to provide the lead

No one compels to part with asset
Or give away the wealth simply to let
It is inviting generosity to work well
Rest can be well depended to tell

Good smile offers nothing
But well intention pays for something
Little gesture with kindness means a lot
As it is need of an hour to be sought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dead is considered as dead As no sentiments are read

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denys dokis16 minutes ago not as good as it should be.

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Dain Greathouse15 minutes ago good, original theme. I think it just needs some work on presentation, style and flow. Comment +1 okay

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Matthew Main16 minutes ago The broken English, while probably unintentional, to me made the poem even better. Great write, I really enjoyed it. Comment +1 great theme

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Love it Alexandria McQueen16 minutes ago Very well done! Comment +1 Beautiful

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Mehta Sir, A n inspiring poem which reflects the truth. As usual the poem is simply superb! What with the remarks of Rajat Sir, quoting an apt example from Guruji! GREAT! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jun 26,2013

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Human beings really act without love and kindness. Frankly speaking, we do feel the same as you composed.... Very touching one! Padmavathi, Secunderabad Jun 25,2013

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jacquie *** really true friend..10 points... hugs!

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My Faith hmmmmm...this is good keep it up Sir

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My Faith hmmmmm...this is good keep it up Sir

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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