Deadly Serious Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Deadly Serious

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A thin and thready threnody
played by the winds on the phone wires.
An eerie haunting melody
regretting unfulfilled desires.

A lamentation which can steal
your joy in life and make you sad
Enhance the miseries you feel

If you are wise you stop your ears
refuse to give in to your fears.

If you do not you will go mad.

The lost souls carried on the wind

Are seeking victims constantly
to join their ghastly company.

To share in their unhappiness
and they can find them easily
In people who cannot express.

Their joy in life to anyone
but wallow in their misery.
and in the end are left alone.
A self fulfilling prophecy.

1-Aug-08

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 23 August 2008

This condition of clutching misery to oneself until it berefts you of even aquaintances, is so prevalent today, this needed saying loud and clear as you have done Ivor. Beautifully rhymed too. Greetings from Fay Slimm.

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Thad Wilk 02 August 2008

Ahh sad but true, people do Wallow in their misery They make others blue They bring (them down too) With this constant - negativity! ! *10*! ! Good One Ivor! Friend Thad

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Rema Prasanna 02 August 2008

this is an eye openor to me.. I close my eyes and ears for all those unpleasant...let it come and attack from all around... wise not to react.. thank you for this prayer.

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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