poet Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Dear Jordan

I'm on the phone with you.
The time goes by so fast
It all goes by so quickly.
Oh how I wish that it could last.

At first I was unsure.
I didnt know if if was true.
But now I am quite certain
That im the one for you.

I'm so glad I met you.
So glad we became friends.
Jordan, you're so perfect.
I want to be with you 'til the end.

When I'm with you, I'm so happy.
When I'm with you, you give me joy.
Every time we talk I'm sure.
Sure that you're the boy.

And once i hear your voice,
I know how much you care.
You reinforce the fact it's real.
And I know you'll always be there.

Jordan, you're so awesome.
I pray loving you is right.
You are always on my mind,
I think about you ev'ry night.

The week I spent with you
Was the best week of my life.
Yeah baby, you complete me,
I want to be your wife.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010
Poem Edited: Thursday, July 7, 2011

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (5/12/2010 9:04:00 AM)

    soo sweet! !
    this one i likes too :)
    & this person is lucky to have u! ! !

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  • Tejaswini Iyer (5/12/2010 3:55:00 AM)

    The poem is really s really good....

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  • Subbaraman N V (5/12/2010 1:03:00 AM)

    Yes, as a poem good! In real life too early! Complete your studies and think of the poem when you come to the age!

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  • Samuel Popeil (5/11/2010 7:48:00 PM)

    can really relate (but towards girls lol) . loved the poem.

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  • Yoni AssisYoni Assis (5/11/2010 5:16:00 PM)

    Good job, Kylee. A sweet, genuine piece. Btw, you don't need to add periods :)

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  • Shady El-shafie (5/11/2010 10:10:00 AM)

    Very nice poem! !
    Luv that style

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  • KYLEE BARTZ (5/11/2010 8:34:00 AM)

    i couldnt think of anything that rhymed with life.

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  • Miranda Will (5/11/2010 8:26:00 AM)

    The Wife part is a little strong. It however was very good

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  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (5/11/2010 4:18:00 AM)

    Absolutely wonderful..this must surely win his heart too :) Blessings and light,
    menime..

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  • Nerisha Kemraj (5/11/2010 3:53:00 AM)

    wow an astounding poem.

    it makes u wonder though can u fall in love at such a young age? but then again love has no boundaries right!

    keep up the good work. i'm impressed.

    one more thing - focus on school now - leav love and marriage for later :)

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (5/10/2010 11:54:00 AM)

    very nice.. you would be an excellent poet.

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  • Amrit Rathi (5/10/2010 8:41:00 AM)

    Very simple and expressive style! I liked your poem. Keep writing with more details.

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