Dear Jordan Poem by Kylee Bartz

Dear Jordan

Rating: 4.2


I'm on the phone with you.
The time goes by so fast
It all goes by so quickly.
Oh how I wish that it could last.

At first I was unsure.
I didnt know if if was true.
But now I am quite certain
That im the one for you.

I'm so glad I met you.
So glad we became friends.
Jordan, you're so perfect.
I want to be with you 'til the end.

When I'm with you, I'm so happy.
When I'm with you, you give me joy.
Every time we talk I'm sure.
Sure that you're the boy.

And once i hear your voice,
I know how much you care.
You reinforce the fact it's real.
And I know you'll always be there.

Jordan, you're so awesome.
I pray loving you is right.
You are always on my mind,
I think about you ev'ry night.

The week I spent with you
Was the best week of my life.
Yeah baby, you complete me,
I want to be your wife.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miranda Will 11 May 2010

The Wife part is a little strong. It however was very good

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KYLEE BARTZ 11 May 2010

i couldnt think of anything that rhymed with life.

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Shady El-shafie 11 May 2010

Very nice poem! ! Luv that style

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Amrit Rathi 10 May 2010

Very simple and expressive style! I liked your poem. Keep writing with more details.

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very nice.. you would be an excellent poet.

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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010

soo sweet! ! this one i likes too :) & this person is lucky to have u! ! !

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Tejaswini Iyer 12 May 2010

The poem is really s really good....

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Subbaraman N V 12 May 2010

Yes, as a poem good! In real life too early! Complete your studies and think of the poem when you come to the age!

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Samuel Popeil 11 May 2010

can really relate (but towards girls lol) . loved the poem.

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Yoni Assis 11 May 2010

Good job, Kylee. A sweet, genuine piece. Btw, you don't need to add periods :)

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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