Death Poem by live to die

Death

Rating: 5.0


As I walk I fall to my knees
knowing that I'm getting
weaker and weaker by the
second my friends try to
comfort me with their sly words
but nothing works and
then all of the sudden
everything turns black
an enternal sleep
but then I relize
I'll be free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

freedom is what you seek don't keep it all in scream if you have to for the next words to leave your lips might be as cold as a still doll can you see my heart looking at yours

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

we will die anyway, it's part and parcel of eternity in question.

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Harley Marie 15 February 2008

This Poem Is Really Good i write Poems Similar To This i'll Try To Get Them Posted Up

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Aryn James 27 December 2007

this is amazing, truly it is.

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