Thursday, September 15, 2011

Death Comments

Rating: 4.0

The poor woman leaked life,
as the my words was thrust upon her chest,
Shadows stalked and
heads watched,
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Thomas Kollamparambil
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Hazel Durham 06 December 2014

An interesting and dark write with good imagery and very imaginative! Thanks for sharing!

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Neetha Sasidharan 02 January 2012

nice poem, , , , , though small it seems scary... heads watched i liked dat line

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Elena Sandu 08 October 2011

To me this poem looks scary and sad, am not sure to understand, let us see some more please. Thank you

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 02 October 2011

dear thomas, you need to go a long way...and you have to hone your words too.. keep writing...

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