Death Bells Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Death Bells

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“Praises may lower the alertness” legend says
The person may feel happy and foolishly stay
He will have different sense of satisfaction
The wrong praise may fill different air with indication

If some criticism is offered for person
He shall always be on guard with so many reasons
He may not want to look like fool
As he is trying to be successful

Some of great falls are witnessed in reality
Wrong notion is good enough to wrack the nobility
Person may try to feel very important
This shall invite his downfall and make it prominent

Wrong advice too may invite public wrath
That shall ring the bells amounting to death
Your carrier will be over on wrong calculation
You may be loosing prestige with no scope for salvation

Be simple man with ears open
Ascertain why praises are showered all of sudden
What can be their motive behind it?
This shall make you stubborn to think and greet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

It was good Carolyn Federuik26 minutes ago It's not like any poem I'm used to reading but everyone is different Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

Lost me Raymond Parfitt29 minutes ago I gave up reading Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

I don't get it. Marta Gonzalez-Morell28 minutes ago It may be just me, I'm no literary critic.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2014

Be simple man with ears open, thanks sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

“Praises may lower the alertness” legend says The person may feel happy and foolishly stay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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