Rebekah Joh

Death Is.... - Poem by Rebekah Joh

Death is when your loved ones must depart
Death is a sharp pain to the heart

Death is a feeling of permanent sadness and pain
Death is when your loved ones have forever gone away

Death is a call to heaven or hell
Death is an eternal mansion or cell

Death is a lesson to learn about
Death is a loss, without a doubt

Death is an unhappy feeling to have
Death is unpleasant on anyone's behalf

Death is something we all will go through
Death is a storm waiting to brew

Death is a lingering crow always overhead
Death is a soul, done being fed

Copyright © Rebekah Johnson (Age 12)

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Comments about Death Is.... by Rebekah Joh

  • (6/30/2009 6:02:00 AM)

    What a deep emotion out of this poem..i love it! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/6/2009 8:36:00 PM)

    I relly know what your saying beck (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    Great poem Rebekah! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2008 8:41:00 PM)

    Death is a lingering crow always overhead
    Death is a soul, done being fed
    those are Fantastic lines. this is written very well. good job.
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  • (12/10/2008 11:46:00 AM)

    hey man i love ur work (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2008 2:32:00 PM)

    i think tht this poem is really emotional
    gd for u rebekah u are going to go somewhere
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  • (11/20/2008 2:49:00 PM)

    really death is a permanent feeling of sadness you have to live with it, nice keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2008 10:23:00 AM)

    very very meaningful keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2008 1:28:00 PM)

    This poem was really really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I know what it feels like to lose a person and your poem really tell how it feels. Good Job! (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2008 5:30:00 PM)

    i agree this is a really GREAT and i mean GREAT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2008 11:46:00 AM)

    you obviously never lost anyone or you would would know it was so much more it is not just loss and suffering it is a disease that eats away at you until you finally agree with yourself and say that it is all your fault and accept the fact you are a monster (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2008 6:15:00 PM)

    omg this poem is so good it really tells you about how death is and what feeling you get. i have expirenced death and you have explained death so well. i give you a 10 out of 10. Good good really good.
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  • (10/2/2008 10:59:00 AM)

    nice you get 10points (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2008 12:33:00 AM)

    people come, people go, why should we mourn for the lost, shouldnt we prepair for the living? ... (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2008 8:54:00 AM)

    we all know what death is but we all afraid to admet that truth and we all try to forget it and go on in this life (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2008 10:55:00 AM)

    I really like this poem it actually says the truth about long have you been writing poems? (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2008 6:48:00 PM)

    I agree death is a ferocious monstre and we all would be in his grip.Good wok (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2008 7:45:00 PM)

    You're poem is awesome. I really liked it.You have real talent. (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2008 5:30:00 PM)

    wow i love it it really is amazing (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2008 1:01:00 AM)

    i luv youre poem it totaly beats mine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 2, 2014

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