Death Roulette Poem by Brandon Hoeg

Death Roulette

Rating: 4.5


IM FALLING DOWN I CANT STAY ON,
IT WAS ALL RIGHT BUT NOW ITS WRONG
AND ALL I EVER DO IS RUN.
IM GOING IN THE GREAT BEYOND,
IM ON A ROAD I CANT STEER ON
THESE NIGHTMARES HAVE ONLY JUST BEGUN.


GET READY TO INVISION DEATH,
MAKE IT COUNT, ITS YOUR LAST BREATH
ITS TIME FOR THIS NIGHTMARE TO BE DONE.
SO TAKE THE GUN AND SPIN IT LEFT,
AIM IT BACK AND TRY YOUR BEST
ITS TIME FOR US TO HAVE SOME FUN.


YOU DIDNT PLAY LIFE BY THE RULES,
YOUR NOW ONE OF THE DEVILS TOOLS
AND NOW YOU WILL PERISH WITH THE REST.
ANOTHER ONE OF GODS YOUNG FOOLS,
THIS GAME IS JUST A SIMPLE DUEL
LIFE IS JUST A GAME OF DEATH ROULETTE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Cordova 18 April 2010

Evil, but good, I give it a 9 and not a 10 because life isn't a game, life is life and only when it's squandered is it a game, keep writing though

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Nora Eason 15 April 2010

Well brandon this poem is well written but I did not like it because it is full of evil darkness.I don't like poems like this they are full of the devil and thats not good. But keep writting never stop, you just need to choose to write something that doesn't sound like your worshiping satan.

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Josh Schultz 22 March 2010

Dude this is the best poem I have ever read like no lie duder.....

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Brandon Hoeg

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