im sorry to you all but i must say good-bye
ive done nothing but failed, now theres no use to try
the only fair option is to die
when your a fallen angel all theirs left to do is die
Im not as happy as you all expected
believe me or neglect it
the evil in me has been resurrected
and has now been perfected
if the devil is my ruler then i wont reject it
i'll accept it, ive always felt like me and him have been connected
so i'll go to the gates of hell, rebel, and tell,
the frail tail on how i once failed
jumped off the scale and landed on a trail
fell, then failed to the gates of hell
now i'll just be honest
i got handed something i never wanted
now forever i will be taunted
cause i failed what needed to be accomplished
so that about pieces it together
i say my good-byes forever
sorry your reading this letter
i just wanted to be better
good-bye mom.....
This is pretty good, Sad but good. I'd watch the rhyming so many words that sounded alike tho. Like make two words and the end of a sentance rhyme then make two more rhyme. But yeah good work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem is really good theres nothing bad to say about the poem. your a good writer keep it up