My Angel Poem by Brandon Hoeg

My Angel

Rating: 4.5


when we met it was unpredictable like a shooting star
I will always love and accept you for who you are.

I love how your wierd and I totally get you,
i love how my heart pounds whenever im with you.

the way we laugh at each other cause we're so funny,
the way we give nick-names like Sweetheart and Honey.

the way we pull all nighters together, dude its so worth it,
we totally get one another and its totally perfect.

the day we first talked was the best night of my life,
I stare at the ceiling thinking about it every night.

we talked all night, we laughed and you listenned,
after that i went to bed but i felt something different.

so I sat there all happy and thought of you for a while,
I whispered 'Good night angel' and went to bed with a smile,
and now forever I will smile.......forever 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crazy Vampire 25 March 2010

awesome! it is sooo sweet!

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red rose of texas 23 April 2010

i like this very much but use a little more creativity red rose of texas

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Lynn Glover 18 April 2010

I really enjoyed this poem, as I am a fan of rhyming poetry. The subject of your poem was very good and the expressions used were excellent. Watch you spelling and keep the work coming. Your Poetic Friend Lynn

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loNeLY AnGel 18 April 2010

awwwwww........ sweet poem.....

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Sherri Coulter 17 April 2010

refreshingly light.....opposite of ur dark.........they compliment each other. 10+

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The Native Emo 25 March 2010

another awesome poem by an awesome person

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Brandon Hoeg

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North Minneapolis
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