Thursday, February 2, 2006

Death Watch Comments

Rating: 5.0

Skeletons skip, ghosts dance,
'Trick or treat! ' 'Trick or treat! '
floats through the night.
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Mary Naylor
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Duncan Wyllie 28 March 2006

This ones creeps up on you bearing teeth.Great Write! Very Scary! Love Duncan

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Chuck Audette 26 March 2006

I love a good creepy poem. -chuck

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Charles M Moore 03 March 2006

Got the jist of this poem sort of lost me a little in the middle, I would have swapped round the third and fourth verses to give it more flow and logic, but then perhaps thats what you intended? who knows, any way nice read, Charlie.

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Sallie Howson 02 February 2006

ohhh scary.............

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David Gerardino 02 February 2006

MARY, nice poem...................

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Mary Naylor

Mary Naylor

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