Friday, June 17, 2005

Deep Blue Seas Comments

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The watery blue seas are like my podles
of water of my deep blue tears that I cryed
over you.
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Samantha Zimmerman
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Steffi Webster 30 October 2005

It's a brilliant poem Samantha and I really like it. One thing though - when you write I've noticed that you make mistakes and sometimes write in text language if you wrote in full than it woul be a lot more powerful and easier to decipher. Well done though.

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Samantha Zimmerman

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