Deep Breathe Within Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Deep Breathe Within

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Deep breathe within
Wednesday,29th May 2019

I suffer pain
and remain restless
with gloom on the face
and find no trace of respite

no one knocks my door
not even neighbors
but one smiling face does
he brings in the hope

I breathe
and believe his words with faith
what a relief from slow death?
like energy pill with each count of breath

he soothes my feelings
as a human being
as close friends
and vows to r main with till an end

I calm down
and stare at an unknown object
what is reality or fact?
I need to look at my approach or act

I am worn out
and can't talk about
I ask permission to leave
and slip in the dreamland to believe

Hasmukh Mehta

Deep Breathe Within
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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