Deep Cuts Poem by Sahar Sahar
Deep Cuts
You an instantaneous spark,
While i am a persistant notion,
Staying on minds,
An intruded impact,
Suffered the intentions,
And scent of politeness,
Slipped from our sides,
Chirps if beautiful bird,
Blended with bray of beast,
This brings me downstairs,
To recreate,
Sketch of boundaries,
For observation,
And above all,
A thought,
Broken like mirror.
When cuts bleed, .............................
Cuts so deep.
A thought, Broken like mirror. When cuts bleed, ............................. Cuts so deep I loved the above metaphor of broken mirror for split, disturbed and profound thoughts. well done.
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4/24/2024 4:41:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
And above all, A thought, Broken like mirror. When cuts bleed, ............................. Cuts so deep. hmm good example, yea once the mirror is borken never joints its parts.. like thoughts.. which always need to be focussed, and done to be in perieving way.. keep to be alive with insiration, and spread to be like the perfume.. i like your poem and even poetry..and enjoy.. and thanks for considering me this much able to go through your work..well done..10/10