Deep Declaration Poem by Brian Mawadri

Deep Declaration

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I feel your absence keenly;
It's a cutting void.
Your voice has left for a far flake adventure.
I am low and sunk into lettrage.
My old words dead and gone;
Rooting me deeper into solitary!

The corridors of my path are longer, misty.
My own reflection causes me dismay.
I now find solace in the clammy dark,
like bats.
Concentrating there, feels cushiony.
Because no one watches:
And technology is out of signal.

My old comrades have vanished;
And believes are like a past memory.
My words are tolling.
And my mind is in mourning.
Because my voice is evidence;
Of sorrow embedded beneath.
That has reddened my eyes.

Wednesday, March 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hurting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 07 September 2020

My old comrades have vanished; And believes are like a past memory. My words are tolling. And my mind is in mourning.- - - - - > I think you want the word: beliefs" - -these 4 lines are important and they read like they're important

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Mawadri 23 February 2018

Thanks@Chinedu Dike for appreciating.

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2018

Poignant and sorrowful rendition crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Brilliant work of ar, rich in metaphors. Thanks for sharing Brian.

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