I feel your absence keenly;
It's a cutting void.
Your voice has left for a far flake adventure.
I am low and sunk into lettrage.
My old words dead and gone;
Rooting me deeper into solitary!
The corridors of my path are longer, misty.
My own reflection causes me dismay.
I now find solace in the clammy dark,
like bats.
Concentrating there, feels cushiony.
Because no one watches:
And technology is out of signal.
My old comrades have vanished;
And believes are like a past memory.
My words are tolling.
And my mind is in mourning.
Because my voice is evidence;
Of sorrow embedded beneath.
That has reddened my eyes.
Poignant and sorrowful rendition crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Brilliant work of ar, rich in metaphors. Thanks for sharing Brian.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My old comrades have vanished; And believes are like a past memory. My words are tolling. And my mind is in mourning.- - - - - > I think you want the word: beliefs" - -these 4 lines are important and they read like they're important