Deep into the ocean of youreyes..
There lies a dark forest of your secrets..
Secret which speaks of your honesty.
Secret which unfolds your hidden emotions..
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Lovely and passionate verse, well conceived and wonderfully brought forth with clarity of thought. A beautiful rendition from the heart. Thanks for sharing Tanya and do remain enriched.
dark forest of your secrets. hidden emotions. Eyes, shine and attraction, divine energy nightmares into beautiful dreams.. belongingness Modesty serenity.. calmness and purity. Keenness, emotions, depth. I studied your poem and collected all these points. That is my praise for your great poem.. dear poetess.
Modesty which reveals your life's interesting journey. Deep into the ocean of your eyes there lies serenity.. Serenity which is as vivid and crystal clear as moon's calmness and purity. Wow, this is a great poem that redefines the depth of looks that the eyes can hold. A serene elaboration of elegance, secrets and emotions hidden in them so nicely crafted. 10+++ for the sharing. Subhas