Deep Ocean Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Deep Ocean
We were knocking the door
Since being neighbor
New beginner
And secret lover
I knew it was difficult
Enough to warrant insult
But heart said "yes"
And mind said "face"
I have across many
With stories so touchy
Yet, it failed to make any impact
This was reality and fact
I have weakness
That reflects on face
I follow and blindly trust
With open mind in quest
I keep patience
And take no chance
It is not on side alone
But other side has also to be seen
It is Deep Ocean
With vast shore unseen
Depth is just an imagination
As is the relation
x Hard to understand. Seem to have more then one subject in the verses cherokee Perez Reyes6 hours ago I am thinking it is about someone trying to get to know someone on a personal level. It could be just a bit more detail for the reader 1 hour ago
Needs grammatical work BabyGirl6 hours ago I love your emotions that your conveying in your work, but I feel it needs a few grammatical fixes... Like i have came across many. But my heart. It just needs a few subject/verb fixes but I do love the depth is just an imagination line...that line is beautiful Comment 0 1 hour ago
ok Harold R Hunt Sr6 hours ago good pen great write. Comment +1
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We were knocking the door Since being neighbor New beginner And secret lover