Freshman - 505 Points (09/1965 / Australia)

Deep Passionate Kisses... - Poem by DEEP DARK SOUL POET

Slow deep passionate kisses so deep, so strong
Sensual touches, flaming lips of so much desire
Tasting each inch of your body so lovingly traced
As my breath touches yours, we become together one

Teasing, tantalizing kisses, our tongues begin to mingle
Strawberry kisses upon my lips of desire
Drinking, tasting savouring the sweet taste on your lips
Deep French kissing as the sweetness of strawberry taste
Dripping from your mouth into mine

Deep wet kisses so sensual and so deep
Strong waves of love full of your sensual touch
Merging, drinking opening a floodgate of sensuousness
Deep, strong loving kisses as our tongues explore

The shower splashes water upon our face as we make sweet love
Merging together so gently as my breath gently touches yours
Deeper, stronger becoming so passionate and long
Lovingly kissing each inch of your body as we together explore

The slippery and intoxicating taste of the strawberry as it drips into your mouth
Deep, passionate and so strong as I hold you so close to me
Taste the sweet taste of my love sweet blossom
As I drink the sweet nectar from your sweet tasting lips

Comments about Deep Passionate Kisses... by DEEP DARK SOUL POET

  • (2/9/2018 1:40:00 AM)

    It's not bad, but you used too many of the same adjectives in my opinion. The more you use the same word, the less power and punch it has. I would say something like this Slow passionate kisses of depth..powerful gifts of touch..lips ablaze with burning desire..tasting every inch of your body...traced by breaths of warmth.. together, we melt into one. (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (11/2/2014 7:54:00 AM)

    A well articulated and beautifully written romantic poem. You captured the deep love felt through passionate kisses to drive home your conviction. I was profoundly touched by the powerful display of passionate emotions as depicted by your poem. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 15, 2012

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