Finally getting a sense of feel
Of an colossal desolation ripping through your skin
Realizing the immense physical discomfort you’ve been feeling all this time
And all the pain you kept bottled deep inside.
Have you finally realized that you killed yourself,
Your acting of endless contentment sealed every symptom of your intense failure
And eased the throbbing discomfort of your inner heart bleeding
Finally getting the sense of feel
Of how anxiety deluged your heart when I was near
My unfaithfulness only teached you how to be stronger on your own
And to confide only to what you felt inside
Was this all a mistake,
If my voice could still reach your heart
Take my last words and define the fragile love
Pull yourself together before it’s too late
And have faith in all the things I try to convey to you
This poem is spectacular! ! I love the way you use your words. So great. So marvelous.
Wonderful! I Love this one. It's abit sad, feels intense with a feeling. But I love it. I'm sure many people can connect with this poem. You really focused on the feelings in this one and what are humans? Just bundles of emotions lol. Great work keep it up!
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I would like to translate this poem
Fragile love easily broken, susceptible to jealousy, loneliness and unfaithfulness.... what a fragile heart! . Thanks for sharing. Highest mark.