Aiden Florence

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Ashes Divide - Poem by Aiden Florence

I never imagine
So simple
Things could be so perfect

In between the lines
Dramatic memories
Remain transcribed

Your harmonic message
So affectionate
Even the empty heart comes to life

So beautiful inside
Like the lily
Eccentric all the time

The world
Now so severe
Without you


Comments about Ashes Divide by Aiden Florence

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/11/2010 9:45:00 PM)

    this could be better if recorded, put an audio background, and put it in a CD... then distribute it... nice poem here... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/16/2008 3:35:00 PM)

    I love it.

    Regards
    Ron
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  • (7/2/2008 2:43:00 PM)

    Like the lily
    ^^our favorite flower! !
    hahah hah i like it! ! ! !
    going under my favorites :)


    mills
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  • (4/5/2008 2:20:00 AM)

    Ashes Divide is beautiful.. Even the title catches your emotions.. =) .. I'm so so so proud of you my dear friend.. Gambateh ne~! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2008 1:08:00 AM)

    I really like this. Like its one of my favrots. I really like how it starts out all nice and sweet, but you ended it like all sad. I cant tell you how much I like it.: ] (Report)Reply

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  • (3/13/2008 6:58:00 PM)

    I really like the last two verses :) (Report)Reply

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  • (3/13/2008 1:40:00 AM)

    Just to let you know... around me lilies blossoms so nice. Its wilt for a while.. but will and always be blossoms again. Cheer up :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2008



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