Depletion (Haiku) Poem by Linda Ori

Depletion (Haiku)

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Caring for others
Energy flows out each day -
Need to fill the well.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 29 August 2006

The absolute fact of life - this one. Very well done.

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Alison Cassidy 26 August 2006

So true Linda. One can sometimes feel as their is no petrol left in the tank. Maybe writing poems as beautiful as this one does just that - fills the poet's well. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 August 2006

MIDNIGHT...Depletion isn't in your Resume, my dear...You give so much, but that is who you are......Your well is the appreciation of people like me who have been a beneficiary of your virtuous persona.'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/fjr

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Nimal Dunuhinga 19 August 2006

Yes Linda it's perfect. A recycle process of nature.......to fill the heart-well?

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Tranquil Ocean 19 August 2006

If you care...the well gets filled automatically by creating a suction: -)

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