Laurence Overmire

Desert Song - Poem by Laurence Overmire

Life is water
Slipping through your fingers

No way to hold or preserve
Drink what you can

While you can
Every drop-more precious

A thirst that cannot be

(Previously published in Poetry Shelter, Apr.2003)

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  • (3/23/2006 10:23:00 PM)

    Wonderful stated and good advice.

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  • (3/23/2006 5:17:00 PM)

    Drop your 'P's' but never your 'Q's' for questions need an answer.This has not affected
    the outcome of your write.In fact sometimes it's those little so-called imperfections that can make all the difference.You are a very tallented writer.Love Duncan
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 5, 2008

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