Destroys Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Destroys Relation

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I am not afraid
No condition should be laid
The field should be open and wide
Love or no love should see it and confide

Trust is main thing
That stands for value or something
We can work together
Only when you stand as one and shoulder

No one can be perfect
That clearly reflects in act
One may try to smart
But that forms basis to part

You are always welcome
Can approach anytime
That is no problem at all
Make decent move and call

Love is not something like commodity
That can be taken as new leaf and gift from almighty
It is available only to lucky persons
Who clearly keep away love away with many reasons?

One should determine
Not compel others to undermine
Or to fall in line
It can not go fine

I always stand true
And clearly prove
What I meant by words
My poetry clearly looks forward

It is better to be alone
If can not go with loved one
That is best way and option
The bond should not destroy the relation

Thursday, March 27, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

I am not afraid No condition should be laid

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

Trust And Love Barry S. Lee9 hours ago Very Heart Renching

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

Nice Ahmad Al_khatat9 hours ago Best poem written Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

Fantastic. Tracy Bollinger9 hours ago Loved the last line. That's a gem all by it's self. Keep it up! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

welcome · · Share · 59 minutes ago · Rajesh Jaiswal and Lisa Lombardi like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

ECLIPSE....... Love is available only to lucky persons

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

keaobaka I think this is quite interesting! thanks dear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

reeana lutra very few gets love

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

yosho P It is better to be alone If can not go with loved one. The great Poet Rabindranath Tagore wrote Jodi tor dak sune keyu naa aase tabe ekla chalo re Means when no one accompanies you on your calling, then proceed alone. Wonderfully written friend, Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

welcome mericel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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