Thomas Spencer

Rookie (1993- current / Orlando)

Devil's Temptation - Poem by Thomas Spencer

divine is the beast within
sculpted to the devil's temptation
perfect as perfect can be
the integrity of the is lost with the sight of she
thoughts of sanity are all but lost
for she steals their soul, heart and cross
sin is what sin does
invite she does to the sina's club
one look at her will never do
you stare at her day or flu
although beauty is an absent problem
the character of she raises all but inquiries
never know what lies within
the soul of an angel of fantasy
or the devil's aid in death and misery


Comments about Devil's Temptation by Thomas Spencer

  • (8/10/2011 11:51:00 AM)


    I really like this one as well! Do you ever write free verse? If not, you should give it a shot. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/21/2008 10:04:00 AM)


    WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I LOVED THIS POEM. this poem is very good, i give it a 10/10. ttfn (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2008 6:20:00 PM)


    This is a very good poem when you represent the devil as a women very outstanding. (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2008 5:28:00 PM)


    nice poem like the flow and settin of it all....sweet that a chick is the devils temptation..nice job (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 11:26:00 PM)


    This is my personal gave, Thomas. I love the way the devil is portrayed as a woman ad the suffering she brings to those that engage her. At least, that's what I got from it. Good piece.

    Best,
    Sarah
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  • (4/13/2008 9:11:00 PM)


    Wow! O_O
    : -0
    Ok that's all I can say!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 11, 2011


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