Devils' Midnight Saga Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Devils' Midnight Saga

Rating: 5.0


Defense base's glory, ablaze
gleaning in starry display
erected a giant smoky column
within a fire work flaunt

Shattering structure to mere rubble
Ejecting weaponry in missile trajectories
Reduced everything to bits ‘n pieces
Forced people to flee in all odd directions

Infants, kids, youth, grown up ‘n aged
Bewildered baffled, and mystified
What, why, when ‘n how, knew nothing
Simply took to their darling feet

While fireflies encroached night sky
metallic remnant fall looked celestial
few were hunting for fresh pictures
getting as close as possible for prestige

Devils' Midnight Saga
Tuesday, June 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: accident,disaster,insensitivity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After one year since Salawa defense base went ablaze
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

While fireflies! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 04 August 2017

The memory of a great catastrophe re played in all its horror and mayhem! Great write!

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Thank you Valsa for the hearty comment.

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Devil's midnight Saga is a sad poem that speaks of not just of accidents or disaster alone but of a terrifying episode. When you see big structures crumbling down in fire, it is a very heart rending sight. The poem also focuses on the insensitivity of human nature, the people who are bent on making it a national news than compassion for the people or the terrible situation. Very well done, Jayatissa. A full vote for this poem.

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Thank you Geeta for your revival comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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