Dilemma Poem by Koo Kooo

Dilemma

Rating: 4.0


No place to have a rest,
no friend to have a chat,
and no love from anybody,
but I started this journey.

Gazing at the setting sun,
counting the stars and steps,
without stopping even for a second,
I've been wading into this way
for long enough to feel
eternal dubious and dismay
that could never be dispelled
however much I tried and tried.

Now, I am standing on the way
that branches to all directions
and thinking that
I determined or was determined.

Ko Ko Oo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 27 June 2009

Good Imagery work, Nice to read, keep it up thanks,10

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Rory Hudson 16 June 2009

Thoughtful and nicely expressed.

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