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Distorted Destiny

Rating: 5.0
The emotions deep inside me begin to whirl up within
As the images of the past sweep by my mind
Shadows of deadly betrayal imprison my brain
And impressions of shattered faith is left behind

With memories of the past surrounding me
I lost myself once more in thoughts of thee
I know not when I lost my conviction
Suffering from the woes of eviction
Oceans of tears flowed from my eyes
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Who's Erwhatsit 08 June 2007
This is beautiful, packed full of emotion and feeling. DK
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Another song sung in a deep emotional way, but music flows thro' every line. The poetic style shows excellence.
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Mary Das 04 May 2007
This is very touching Anu. So much of pain in it. Hope things are okay. Keep up your good work.
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Narayana Raja 02 May 2007
A Good thoughtly worded poem of an youngster with a matured mind.Just change this sentence'For sorrow and pain are now friends of mine' to 'For sorrow and pain are now enemies of mine'.Hats off to you Anu. Get going to the heights of poetic hill with your tender heart of late teen.
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