Saturday, April 22, 2006

Divided Loyalties Comments

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When placed between two loyalties
And a choice needs to be made
Reason and logic disappear
And simplicity starts to fade.
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T.. Veronica
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Séamus Fox 11 July 2006

Thank you for commenting on my work Taryn slowly going through yours and I like what I see good rhyming schemes! I have noticed that when I read one poet it tends in a subconcious way to influence my own work, though I wouldnt notice until I look back on it so now I read small peices of many poets and I end up with a contrasting style. I loved the Idea behind the poem as well as your words. Well done. Seamus

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Evie Johnson 22 April 2006

great poem! amazing!

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Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

Taryn, excellent poem! Great title and your words sum it up brilliantly! Brian

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