Aashish Ameya

Divorce - Poem by Aashish Ameya

Thorns grown up on innocent
Flower’s chest
Eyes are bleeding
Parents just got divorced

Comments about Divorce by Aashish Ameya

  • (3/26/2010 12:44:00 PM)

    What a humane poem…eyes and hearts [my addition] are bleeding…
    Ms. Nivedita
    PS 10+
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  • (1/28/2008 1:36:00 AM)

    I've been through divorce and I've seen it as well. Good way to write in such a short volume. Keep up the writing and posting. I think I would love to read more of your poetry. And suprisingly, I havent even wrote about divorce..... (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Partlow (8/24/2007 9:59:00 PM)

    Indeed, I wish I could write so concisely - But I don't. Here is my piece on Divorce:
    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/divorce-another-matter-of-course-the-storm-brews/
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  • (4/26/2007 8:23:00 AM)

    Love it...I've never seen so much depth in such a short poem...Wonderful! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2006 2:46:00 AM)

    Aashish, you have conveyed so much feelingin four short lines. A beautiful poem. Sincerely, Alison (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2006 8:17:00 AM)

    Amazing...the terrible impact of parents'eparation expressed in just four lines. I would like to explain as I got the meaning:

    'Flower' refers to the child of the parents - since the child is a product of the parents, so he/she is called a flowers. 'Thorns' refer to the fact that this child shall no longer lead a secure life in the shade of his/her parents. Eyes aree 'bleeding' because they have been pricked by thorns - that is theycan obscurely foresee their insecurity. The last line is clear enough.

    Keep writing!

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  • (4/28/2006 12:34:00 AM)

    Makes no sense...... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 27, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 20, 2010

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