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Rating: 4.7
Thorns grown up on innocent
Flower’s chest
Eyes are bleeding
Parents just got divorced
What a humane poem…eyes and hearts [my addition] are bleeding… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+
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Daniel Partlow 24 August 2007
Indeed, I wish I could write so concisely - But I don't. Here is my piece on Divorce: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/divorce-another-matter-of-course-the-storm-brews/
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Samantha Perrywinkle 26 April 2007
Love it...I've never seen so much depth in such a short poem...Wonderful! ! ! ! !
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Alison Cassidy 12 May 2006
Aashish, you have conveyed so much feelingin four short lines. A beautiful poem. Sincerely, Alison
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Nibedita Deb 28 April 2006
Amazing...the terrible impact of parents'eparation expressed in just four lines. I would like to explain as I got the meaning: 'Flower' refers to the child of the parents - since the child is a product of the parents, so he/she is called a flowers. 'Thorns' refer to the fact that this child shall no longer lead a secure life in the shade of his/her parents. Eyes aree 'bleeding' because they have been pricked by thorns - that is theycan obscurely foresee their insecurity. The last line is clear enough. Keep writing! Thx, N.D.
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Rahul Unnikrishnan 28 April 2006
Makes no sense......
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