Divorce Poem by Aashish Ameya

Makes no sense......

Heartbreaking account of the pangs of a child on the separation of her parents.

What a humane poem…eyes and hearts [my addition] are bleeding… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

Love it...I've never seen so much depth in such a short poem...Wonderful! ! ! ! !

Aashish, you have conveyed so much feelingin four short lines. A beautiful poem. Sincerely, Alison

Amazing...the terrible impact of parents'eparation expressed in just four lines. I would like to explain as I got the meaning: 'Flower' refers to the child of the parents - since the child is a product of the parents, so he/she is called a flowers. 'Thorns' refer to the fact that this child shall no longer lead a secure life in the shade of his/her parents. Eyes aree 'bleeding' because they have been pricked by thorns - that is theycan obscurely foresee their insecurity. The last line is clear enough. Keep writing! Thx, N.D.