Do You Have A Moment God? Poem by Marilyn Lott

Do You Have A Moment God?

Rating: 4.7

So much there is that is bothering me
I really needed to pause
To have a chat with God, you see
For whatever was the cause.

He was always my friend so I felt
I could chat any day, any time
The subject didn't matter either
For He always would find the time.

I asked about what He felt could be done
To make our world a better place
So much is going on, you see
At a quick and a damaging pace.

Anger had simply manifested itself
Through the world in an astonishing way
We needed help as mortals do
To keep living for another day.

I don't feel safe with strangers, God
I know that I watch too much TV
And hear about the anger out there
So intensified is life's message to me.

I know You gave us all brains, Lord
But folks are using theirs to hurt
They are planning something very soon
Home terrorists in large dangerous spurts.

So help us, Lord, I pray to you
It is for our planet that is in jeopardy
The sooner You can do this, God
Will be best it seems to me!

Do You Have A Moment God?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 14 April 2024

Great poem, Marilyn! I give it five stars.

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

stanza 1: 'me see'? ? Are you referring to this: The Holy See is the universal government of the Catholic Church...'? ?

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

Wellll, on the one hand (my left one) I think now of 'God' (of whatever gender) is A JOKE, and that 'God' is laughing at US. (not the U.S.) , YOU & ME. Ha ha ha! ! ! ! (cont.)

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

Here is BRI's suggestion(s) : If you believe in 'God': each time you prepare to sleep, pray: 'Lord, now I lay be down to sleep. I pray that You, my soul, will keep. Etc., etc., etc.' Good luck!

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

**** (cont.) ok, not with a complete brain: Anencephaly is a condition that prevents the normal development of the brain and the bones of the skull.' Most die before or withing a few months of birth.

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

Let me read more of this. [Quiet! I'm reading.] Marilyn, are YOU SURE that all humans were born with brains? ? ? Actually, I believe some are NOT: ' **** (cont.)

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

(CONT.) Yes, God is a JOKE, created by 'man', not 'the other way around' aka 'Man' is created by 'God'. Yet, no matter who created whom/what I believe that 'God' is supportive and soothing for many people. : ) bri

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

(cont.) But I believe that 'God' was MADE BY

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
Close
Error Success