Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Does He Need - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

God needed no intelligence
Only showed His presence
It hardly mattered
When the followers spread hatred

The friends disappeared
The devils appeared
The mind drove towards
With only hollow words

We tried to prove his presence
Sans love’s essence
Everything was added to fragrance
But alas! What was our stance?

Only material gain
With lots of pain
Contact with nature completely lost
We are now unhappy lot

Where is peace?
Why life is not an ease?
Why do we hate and kill people?
Does He need our hands to add troubles?

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/3/2015 9:31:00 PM)

    welcome Lonelygirl Pasayon Acido, Scott Ransopher
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/3/2015 3:05:00 AM)

    welcome Rinu Morzi
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  • Soul Watcher (8/3/2015 2:03:00 AM)

    We need his law to stop killing others, but we shouldn't misunderstand his rules.
    Why do we hate and kill people?
    Because we didn't get the reality of his Rules.
    Does He need our hands to add troubles?
    He doesn't need us, but he wants us to end troubles by our correct understanding of his law.: -)
    Thanks
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2015 10:14:00 PM)

    excellent
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2015 10:13:00 PM)

    John Cooper likes this. Hasmukh Mehta wecome Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
    today
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2015 10:12:00 PM)

    John Cooper likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta wecome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2015 8:20:00 PM)

    Why do we hate and kill people?
    Does He need our hands to add troubles?
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 2, 2015



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