indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Does It Need A V.Day? - Poem by indira babbellapati

ever since the i within I
come to be acknowledged
i've been left in wonder
'what are you to me? '
well, it didn't really need
a valentine's day but it
needed only a silent peek within
to tell you, you're:
my laughter unbound
my silence expanding
my expression spontaneous
my emotions unvoiced
my tears unshed
and
my tears flowing...

14feb2010
10.38hrs


Comments about Does It Need A V.Day? by indira babbellapati

  • (2/24/2010 10:18:00 PM)


    Interesting. I find it curious how you try to shy away (or shrug your shoulder) as if 'it didn't need a valentine's day', when you portray so much emotions...'my tears unshed/and/my tears flowing',
    Don't be afraid to Cry. I like this sensuous read.Thnx for sharing.

    Blessings.
    Leonard
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  • (2/12/2010 12:55:00 AM)


    Thata a very good one nice feelings flew out from your poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 11, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 3, 2010


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