Does It Need A V.Day? Poem by indira babbellapati

Does It Need A V.Day?

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ever since the i within I
come to be acknowledged
i've been left in wonder
'what are you to me? '
well, it didn't really need
a valentine's day but it
needed only a silent peek within
to tell you, you're:
my laughter unbound
my silence expanding
my expression spontaneous
my emotions unvoiced
my tears unshed
and
my tears flowing...

14feb2010
10.38hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leonard Dabydeen 24 February 2010

Interesting. I find it curious how you try to shy away (or shrug your shoulder) as if 'it didn't need a valentine's day', when you portray so much emotions...'my tears unshed/and/my tears flowing', Don't be afraid to Cry. I like this sensuous read.Thnx for sharing. Blessings. Leonard

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Anju Addanki 12 February 2010

Thata a very good one nice feelings flew out from your poem.

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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