Dolce Far Niente Poem by indira babbellapati

Dolce Far Niente

Rating: 3.2


(sweet idleness)

in the near zero visibility
of a winter gaining its momentum
i felt as if i was the only walker
on this winter road

through the thick fog
that insulated me from
the world known and unknown
your desire for me touched me
lifting the fog
layer by layer...

08nov2009
14.44hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 08 November 2009

wow what a sweet poem shared...............wonderfully written piece....top marks

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Imagery to die for Indira and your poem comes to life right in front of my eyes. Can we have a sequel? 10 love Karin

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Patrick A. Martin 09 November 2009

From out of the fog you stole my heart.-

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Ranjit Ravindran 08 November 2009

love your attitude... In a dense fog during one of my morning walks, I felt exactly the same but my desire was to capture a picturesque hut in my camera!

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Maitreyee Joshi 08 November 2009

wow, a wonderfully romantic poem.i loved it.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 08 November 2009

A very nice expression full of feminine grace and trait.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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