Thursday, September 8, 2011

Domestic Violence! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the darkness i did sit upon my bed i did not fit,
Behind the door the sounds did come of screams and bangs it wasn't fun,
My mothers crys were harsh to hear as i sat there and covered my ears,
And as they burst through the door the pain she felt as he poured,
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Teza Lee
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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 September 2015

A terrible experience. You might be interested in my version of Domestic Regards Sally.

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Margaret O Driscoll 06 August 2015

Very vivid and descriptive, heartfelt poem!

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Teza Lee 21 November 2011

Thank you so much for you comments im so glad you like the poem!

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Joe Garson 17 November 2011

WOW...heart-wrenching and vivid descriptions of brutality as seen through the eyes of a child...a well-crafted poem...the reader can feel the pain...

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Machelle Harris 09 September 2011

loveee it! good job and i have a poem i make on domestic violence

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