Don'T Go Poem by akram awadat

Don'T Go

Rating: 3.5


Don't go

Don't go away
Don't leave me alone
You're the only one who knows me
where will you go?

I can't do anything
Just watching you go
You are mine and I am yours
We share every thing together

I can't live without you
my life is nothing without you
Just look at me
I am sad...I'm lonely

I like to say something for you
you are the only one who knows me
I'll wait for you
please don't leave me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2009

A very expressive and emotional plea not to leave nicely described. Best wishes. Naseer

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Lady Grace 23 December 2009

expressive.. dear friend, i know u have the potential to make poems, so add more my dear friend..ok...the poem is nice, ..it is meaningful..

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Emma Adamyan 19 July 2010

sincere, sorry... that word must be written with big letters only SINCERE! pure emotions while parting. a baby`s tounge could say so true and touchy...

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Good expression. A yearning heart, emotional write! ; D

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Sandra Dodd 28 January 2010

Very heartfelt and sweet. Coincidentally reminded me of my poem Single? Really? Can You Hit Undo?

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Vinod Kumar 24 December 2009

The Original Sentiment situation, it is beyond the words, but the time is the master of the faith, Thanks dear poet for sharing the wonderful lines,10.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 23 December 2009

simple and beautiful. You expressed your mind here.

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