Don't Quit Poem by Sona Khajuria

Don't Quit

Rating: 3.9


The misty seasons passed by me.
And i lay in a corner for years alone.
One messy day,
A butterfly crossed my window.
Like new greenery, coming to cover a bare meadow.

For a few minutes, she roamed around.
Then settling on my hand.
She stared at me in a way.
As if reminding me of my living.
A cocoon shell i was engraving.

She was tender, though hit hard at my shell.
Broke it and drag me back.
Gave me her colours and an unwearied spirit.

Narrated me her hardships.
And endless transformations.
Being broken timely, still so complete.
Look at her wings, beauty can be seen.

Though being a human,
I was underestimating myself.
That lucky day, i was blessed with a tiny teacher.
And an everlasting lesson.

With her opened wings to fly back.
I was reborned with zeal and vigour.
A passionate fire inside of me. Burning even brighter.
To make me sour higher and higher.

Don't Quit
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In everbody's life, there comes a time when we stop believing in ourself.... That is the time we have to make ourselves believe that we are made to suffer and get back to our spirit.... Nobody will ever walk in your shoes, others can only walk with you...so one should be strong enough to enjoy one's own company and one's own trustworthy friend... That time has made me wrote this. while writing my eyes were overflown with tears... Now scrolling the same words make me smile today 😊.... The brightest stars needs the darkest sky.... Dark is an opportunity..don't lose it it..don't quit there... Be strong and come out strongly n brightly 😊
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hi Master Of Disguise 14 May 2018

Caught by the curlies are we?

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Sona Khajuria 08 June 2018

Thankyou dear friend @Jez Brul

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Sona Khajuria 16 May 2018

Thankyou so much Sir @Kumarmani Mahakul 😊 And truly said, ordinary things are also full of wisdom... We just need a vision that can recognize it and appreciate it 😊

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2018

That lucky day, i was blessed with a tiny teacher. And an everlasting lesson. With her opened wings to fly back. I was reborned with zeal and vigour. A passionate fire inside of me. Burning even brighter. To make me sour higher and higher.......touchng expression with nice theme. From a tiny teacher we gain more wisdom. A brilliant poem has been shared astutely.10

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Sona Khajuria 14 May 2018

Thankyou so much Sir Dr.tony Brahmin 😊

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2018

A butterfly crossed my window For a few minutes, she roamed around. Then settling on my hand. She stared at me, The brightest stars needs the darkest sky.... Dark is an opportunity..don't lose it. great and marvelous advice. it empowers all who aree dejected..... thank u dear poet.. tony

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