Don't Waste Invaluable Time Poem by me poet yeps poet

Don't Waste Invaluable Time



I never count syllables

I have no time
sitting idle in Quarantine

laps top on top
of laps of mine

but
still I chime
and my poems rhyme

many clap for me
so keep writing

syllables now a days are for silly

in olden days
'twas a pass time

now we have

tv cv and biwi

Saturday, May 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Biwi means
wife
and if ur are one
then add on

hubby
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 31 May 2020

Free verse is always better and easier to express one's ideas in poetry. But certain poetic forms have to be within a certain syllable count like limericks, sonnets etc. It needs effort and discipline on the part of a poet to restrict himself within a poetic frame.....! So I cannot fully agree with you that it is a waste of time, counting syllables. However I enjoy your sense of humour!

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

" Laps top on top" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 30 May 2020

Hahaha so funny. If that is true Food should be salty As it raises BP. Beauty of every thing Lies in being submissive It's we who have been progressive To earn the crown of busy wizy Mister hubby where to add on. No dirth of words in house of the poet. Lavishly sprinkling until greenery spreads. Good words Sir. Yes olden days they had much time.

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