Valerie Anne Sumagang


'Done With Your Love' - Poem by Valerie Anne Sumagang

Sometimes it’s hard to forget about my past
because our love just went too fast
it happened in school
That we were so cool

Our love started like a fairytale
You were the prince and I was the damsel
Let’s cut the chase
Your smile left me in a daze

I am so willing
And I can’t explain what I’m feeling.
Nobody knows those special conversations on the phone
and now it's over and I feel so alone

Why? Why did you hurt me?
It’s the unanswered question that keeps on haunting me.
I trusted you like I have trusted no other
I thought our love was going to last forever

You showered me with sweet words and promised not to hurt me
I believed and drowned with those words that you told me
But it was all a lie
And I wanted to die

For a long time I lived a life full of bitterness and pain
Enclosed with darkness and shame
Living a life with nothing to gain
And shattered into pieces and you are to blame

Now you want to be in my life again
What for? To give me another pain
You’ve asked me to love you again.
Can't you see that all you gave me was pain?

I know that if I let you back in my life again
Would risk my heart to be in the same nightmare that I don’t want to bargain
I was once drowned in an ocean of pain
My happiness is yet to be regained

Before, I didn’t know how to mend my broken heart
It is like solving a puzzle with a missing part
But the pieces didn’t fit
We’re actually misfits

But the past is over and gone
The things that happened cannot be undone
I was once your dove
But Now I can finally say that I’m DONE with your LOVE!

Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart

Form: Cinquain


Comments about 'Done With Your Love' by Valerie Anne Sumagang

  • (12/2/2015 11:50:00 AM)


    love nga naman nakakabihag at nakakabagabag...salamat mahusay ito..gusto ko (Report) Reply

    Valerie Anne Sumagang Valerie Anne Sumagang (12/7/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    i'm glad you like it :)

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  • Chinedu Dike (10/14/2015 8:28:00 PM)


    Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - a voyage of bliss while it lasted. It is however, whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning if not carefully nurtured by both couples. It's a lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Indeed one must have courage to walk out of distress occasioned by painful love experience. A beautiful poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Anne. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/20/2015 1:10:00 PM)


    A powerful poem with a strong closing statement. Thanks, Valerie (Report) Reply

    Valerie Anne Sumagang Valerie Anne Sumagang (9/26/2015 9:55:00 PM)

    thank you for reading my poem.. i really appreciate it :)

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 13, 2015


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