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Dos Besos (A Brief Love Story)

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The morning sun warmed the dew
from the opening rosebud;
a bee visited the fragrant heart of the rose;
the breeze tumbled a petal to the water,
drifted the pale petal across the surface of the water.
You surprised me gently.

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I thought – hoped – the emotional baggage
was safely in the locker,
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Indira Babbellapati 25 October 2009
The morning sun warmed the dew from the opening rosebud; a bee visited the fragrant heart of the rose; the breeze tumbled a petal to the water, drifted the pale petal across the surface of the water. You surprised me gently. the best love story i've ever read! i salute you, sir...
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Anjali Sinha 30 June 2009
The sun warmed the breeze tumbled and I was surprised to read such lovely poems thanks sir -10 anjali
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anurag duggal 25 June 2009
Sir you write well...and i love the metaphor of memories like guided missiles..... but you have stopped commenting on my poems...i would love to hear from you once again
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Black Mendilouche 20 June 2009
This poem speaks to me - I have been the girl on the other end of that gross intrusion of reality. 'but like a Houdini homing pigeon it came back, like a smart missile locked in on thought patterns it found the target, ' This imagery I especially like.
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