Douse The Candle Flame Poem by Sarah Persson

Douse The Candle Flame

Rating: 5.0


Intentions that I wander to,
The mist is sometimes thick,
My eyes, they search through tiny gaps,
To find the core, the candle wick.

Once the wick is found I find,
The tricks it plays within my mind
And all intentions crumble down,
I have no voice, no words I find.

It leads me to this darker place,
But it is here that I can rest,
No expectations glance my way,
No crowded rooms, no time of day.

A place where I can lay my head,
To hide away and settle down,
A place where I can close my eyes,
And douse the candle flame, just drown.

Friday, December 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2017

Eyes search through tiny gaps to find the core of light. Life searches light to overcome darker place. All should gain mercy light of God. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

Wellington, Shropshire
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