Down The Passage Poem by gershon hepner

Down The Passage



Down the passage that we didn’t take,
past the door we never opened, lie
goals that once we tended to mistake
as quite impossible, and still deny
we could, when younger, ever have achieved,
although they were the possibilities
that we abandoned since we were deceived
by points of view we thought we must appease
like enemies that will not let you pass
to territories they claim are out of bounds,
like castles in the air or college grass
which to the hoi polloi is out of bounds.
Humankind must bear reality;
there’s no alternative, and when we’re burnt
we should rejoice in our mortality,
not reinterpret non- events that weren’t.

Inspired by T. S. Eliot’s Burnt Norton

Time present and time past
Are both perhaps present in time future,
And time future contained in time past.
If all time is eternally present
All time is unredeemable.
What might have been is an abstraction
Remaining a perpetual possibility
Only in a world of speculation.
What might have been and what has been
Point to one end, which is always present.
Footfalls echo in the memory
Down the passage which we did not take
Towards the door we never opened
Into the rose-garden. My words echo
Thus, in your mind.
But to what purpose
Disturbing the dust on a bowl of rose-leaves
I do not know.
Other echoes
Inhabit the garden. Shall we follow?
Quick, said the bird, find them, find them,
Round the corner. Through the first gate,
Into our first world, shall we follow
The deception of the thrush? Into our first world.
There they were, dignified, invisible,
Moving without pressure, over the dead leaves,
In the autumn heat, through the vibrant air,
And the bird called, in response to
The unheard music hidden in the shrubbery,
And the unseen eyebeam crossed, for the roses
Had the look of flowers that are looked at.
There they were as our guests, accepted and accepting.
So we moved, and they, in a formal pattern,
Along the empty alley, into the box circle,
To look down into the drained pool.
Dry the pool, dry concrete, brown edged,
And the pool was filled with water out of sunlight,
And the lotos rose, quietly, quietly,
The surface glittered out of heart of light,
And they were behind us, reflected in the pool.
Then a cloud passed, and the pool was empty.
Go, said the bird, for the leaves were full of children,
Hidden excitedly, containing laughter.
Go, go, go, said the bird: human kind
Cannot bear very much reality.
Time past and time future
What might have been and what has been
Point to one end, which is always present.

6/2/05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 10 June 2005

This poem, in my opinion, is too much in your head. Eliot's poem has images of the heart. Even though your poem has a scholarly shine, it lacks soul. You can save it by some images with which the reader can say 'Ahhhhhh, yes.' Raynette

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