Dream Poem by kirilee S..

Dream

Rating: 4.0


What do you dream of when you go to sleep?
The little memories you like to keep.
A fantisy you hope to become real,
a nightmare to make you screal,
what eva your dreaming about
may it be sweet for the rest of your life.

(sorry for the spelling mistakes)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2008

The idea in poetry is simple but hard to execute. You want to say the most meaningful thing you can. By using the fewest words possible. This was a good job. GW62

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