Dream Poem by Anne Ornelas

Dream

Rating: 3.0


here's a story about a girls dream

walking in an unkown alley
all of a sudden a lady dressed in black
appears and says
'its your time'
the girl just stares straight into the ladys eyes and says
' i'll go when i'm ready so get the hell away'
she walks away and starts to ignore the lady in black,
while walking a black car drives up beside the girl and the driver says
'do you want a ride? '
the girl without speaking gets into the car and the girl not looking up does not realize its the lady.
the lady steps on the gas and the car is going 115 mph. the girl panics and trys to get the driver to slow down and at that very moment she realizes its the lady in black. the girl screamed out
'WHAT DO YOU WANT? ! ! ! ! '
and the lady ounce again repeats
'its your time'
the girl all scared asks
'my time for what? '
At that very moment the girl realizes that its her time to die
while she realized that she did not realize she was on a flat table in a hospital and the doctors trying to bring her back, the girl decides that
she should not fight it and just let go.
and before going into a dark new world she sees the lady in black one last time and the girl says
'What is your name? '
the lady stares at the girl and says
'i have no name but people know me as death'
and at that the girl is dead and burried deep down into the dark brown ground.



Anne Ornelas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Mitchell 27 December 2008

I like this one, its good. just remember to spell cheek k :)

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Thomas Viruvelil 19 September 2008

good dreaming and turning into poem could have been better with less words

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