Thomas Viruvelil

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Architect and management Consultant by profession.Have been writing poems for sometime on love, frustrations and death.

Thomas Viruvelil Poems

1.
Be With Me Always

Looking at your face
seeing those whisphering eyes
feeling you close to me
I simply do not know
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2.
God Laughing At Me

I asked him:
'Can I see the body? '
'Yes.before the doctors come'
He opened the door
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3.
Onam And King Mahabali

Long long back
We had this King called Mahabali
When he was ruling,
there was no sins.
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4.
Alone, How Long I Can Go?

Alone, how long I can go?
Do I need to hear your voice near me?
Do I need to feel your sweating hand inside my hand,
Making me feel you are with me.
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5.
One More Day With You

Like a man sentenced to death
I count each day as if it is precious
It is a real pity
you cannot extract even a bit of love for me
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Thomas Viruvelil Comments

Linda Jenkinson 18 October 2005

i enjoyed reading your poems very much, it is rare indeed this love you have for smi...i would dearly love to read more...maybe you could write about other aspects of your life and situation...best wishes and please keep writing...linda xxx

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Gillian.E. Shaw 21 September 2005

Now you have written of your feelings and they are down on paper perhaps you should take a step back and write in more generalized terms. One can identify with feelings. However the human condition in general is something more solid and may add more weight and credibility to your poetry. To expand in order to express, to have the ability to move on will be a positive step. The focus then, should be more on form (which needs exploring) rather than on content.

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Mary Nagy 08 September 2005

Thomas, I have read all of your poems. They are very lovely. You are obviously very much in love with Smi. If she even loves you half as much as you do her, you will both be very happy. Very sweet to have such love and passion. I would be interested to read if you write poetry on other topics though? I'll keep my eye out for your work. Sincerely, Mary

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