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Eyes

Rating: 3.4

Looking at a picture
Figuring ourt its secrets
Looking into the depth of
his eyes.
A set of two black eyes
Like a pair of dice
Seeing the pain, and
the truth behind those
cold set eyes.
Wanting to put life into
those ounce big brown eyes
but truth be told it cant be done for
he has his eyes closed
for ever.

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Adam Reed 14 May 2011

i like the details that was pretty awesome :)

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Ian Singer 12 May 2009

nicley written. write more

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Kesav Easwaran 07 May 2009

how nicely you end this wrte! ...good work, Anne...thanks...10

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anurag duggal 04 May 2009

lovely poem the line i liked best was eyes like dice...never have read this comparison before ever deep connotations to it lovely

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Alouy Martinez 27 April 2009

Nice use of words... little bit realistic.... alot of feeling you supress and surely you seeam that you're in love with somebody.... WHO IS IT I WOUNDER? ? ?

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