Dream Poem by Yunfei HeLu

Dream

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What is a dream?
It's the power that cheers you up when you're in trouble.
It's the flower that grows on the cliff but never gives up.
It's the footstep that keeps moving towards the wind and the rain.
It's the light that shines your heart in the dark!


Maybe, my dream is far away,
But please don't laugh at it.
Because I know that deeply,
Only the people who always chase their dreams
Can reach where they want to go one day.

Thursday, May 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 24 May 2018

dream and life, life itself is a dream.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Yunfei. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 25 May 2018

Witty motivational piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Thought provoking, clear, focused and factual. Beautiful poem elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Yunfei.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2018

A new and fine definition of dream...... your explanations give us more hope. you know deeply you write......depth.. is a always a poet's concern.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Rajnish Manga 24 May 2018

Only the people who always chase their dreams Can reach where they want to go one day..... //.... A poem with a profound message.

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Rajnish Manga 24 May 2018

Perfect entry with a poem of exquisite beauty. Welcome to this Forum, My Friend.

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